An essay and an answer, assessed.
Thanks David for this. Really really helpful! Please can you tell me what mark this essay would get and any feedback on this? Thanks
Pleased you found it useful. As for a mark, that is for others to decide. I wouldn't have posted it if I didn't think it was a very good answer. As for feedback, that is the whole point of my AO1/AO2 breakdown. You don't need any more than that.
Thanks David for this. Really really helpful! Please can you tell me what mark this essay would get and any feedback on this? Thanks
Pleased you found it useful. As for a mark, that is for others to decide. I wouldn't have posted it if I didn't think it was a very good answer. As for feedback, that is the whole point of my AO1/AO2 breakdown. You don't need any more than that.